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Date: 2008-07-11 05:41 pm (UTC)no subject
Date: 2008-07-11 05:44 pm (UTC)She wore a light green skirt.
She wore a light, green skirt.
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Date: 2008-07-11 05:49 pm (UTC)Oddly, I'd place the comma into "green, light skirt" for some reason. Maybe I don't want to give the impression that the skirt incorporates traffic signals.
Besides, I don't know what a "tight green" might be anyway.
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Date: 2008-07-11 06:20 pm (UTC)no subject
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Date: 2008-07-11 05:48 pm (UTC)no subject
Date: 2008-07-11 06:02 pm (UTC)"tight, green silk skirt"
"tight, green, silk skirt"
"tight green silk skirt"
Interestingly when it's not colour or material, I'm more likely to put in commas.
"strong, rough hands"
"big, hard fist"
"big black fist"
"tall iron tower"
"tall, listing tower"
Evidently, I am made of random. But that's in my own writing. What I'd pick out in proofing is not always the same.
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Date: 2008-07-11 06:02 pm (UTC)no subject
Date: 2008-07-11 06:22 pm (UTC)no subject
Date: 2008-07-11 06:10 pm (UTC)no subject
Date: 2008-07-11 06:15 pm (UTC)Hence the difference between "she is wearing a short black skirt" and, for example, "her skirt is short, black, and pleated."
But I'm open to hearing other explanations.
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Date: 2008-07-11 07:18 pm (UTC)no subject
Date: 2008-07-11 06:23 pm (UTC)So, I have a vague feeling that the commaful version is more correct, but I'm more likely to use the commaless version, in the first case. In the second case I have a stronger feeling that the commaful version is correct, I sorta want "tight green" to be a color otherwise, which is probably because it sounds like "light green" or "bright green" or something.
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Date: 2008-07-11 06:29 pm (UTC)no subject
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Date: 2008-07-11 06:45 pm (UTC)no subject
Date: 2008-07-12 11:49 pm (UTC)no subject
Date: 2008-07-14 02:36 pm (UTC)I use the first form, without the comma, when I'm writing an email or other informal note, and the second form, with the comma, if I'm writing for some kind of publication (LJ counts).
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Date: 2008-07-15 01:51 pm (UTC)